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Once there was a girl
Who was very happy
She had many friends and enjoyed life to the fullest
Her friend wrote her a story saying why he loved her
She didn't fit in, but that was ok
She had lots of people to talk to
And she could always sleep at night

Once there was a girl
Who was pretty happy
She had   friends and enjoyed life
Her friends made her cards
She didn't fit in, but that was okay
She still had people to talk to
And she could still  sleep at night

Once there was a girl
Who was happy when she was with  her friends
She enjoyed life but she couldn't help but notice the dark side
Her friends made her presents when they remembered the special days
She didn't fit in and it sometimes hurt
But she still had people to talk to
Although she sometimes had trouble sleeping at night


Once there was a girl
Who was only happy when she was alone
All her friends had left and she didn't see much of the happiness in life any more
Her remaining friends made  her a list of how not to be depressed
She didn't fit in and it hurt a lot
Nobody talked to her and the ones she had to talk to didn't listen
And she could hardly sleep at night at all any more

Once there was a girl
Who nobody saw or heard any more
So she left
depression...
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ShatteredMoonbeam Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
goodness child. GOODNESS. if you wrote poetry and did really pretty drawings to go along with them that'd be soooooo coool. :) WHY DID I NOT KNOW You WROTe THIS wELL
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kiricat14 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
gee thanks! <3 that means a lot to me!
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Oreo-Falcon Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
That's so sad... But good poem!
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kiricat14 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
thank you so much! :3
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CosmicAlbatross Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
Also, making a list of how not to be depressed? Someone should tell them that's a waste of time, it doesn't work like that. Too bad so many people think it does.
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kiricat14 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
i know. i agree completely. they were just trying to be nice, though, so i couldn't deny it...
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CosmicAlbatross Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
I really like it
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kiricat14 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
thank you!
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SecretAura Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
"So she left". with depression that is all the end feels like it could be.
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kiricat14 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
i agree...
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